Is this sort of ‘Too Much’ for a college application essay?
I was at the airport gate where I hailed a cab; I collected my luggage and started loading the trunk with it. I shut the trunk door and paused for a second to gaze upon the perfect crystal sky, telling me everything is going to be alright till I approached the backseat door and entered the vehicle. The driver was friendly with all the silver hairs that suggest comfort; he met me with a wide grin crossing his face asking me where I am heading to. “To Penn-State, if you please”. He chuckled and said “Penn-state it is” before he revved the engine allowing this short conversation to come to an end and enter a moment of utter silence.
This is the introduction. Do I need to be more concise or its ok?
that depends on the total length of the paper. and what your point is. so far you’ve just set up a scenario with a setting – i have no idea what your point is or what exactly you’re talking about.
Ethiopian Welo Opal Cab AAA color on a crystal base with a blue tint
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25.50CT. MATCHED PAIR RED CRYSTAL DRUZY AGATE GEODE OVAL CAB GEMSHOP $14.99 |
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H0001449 Gorgeous crystal agate CAB Cabochon $2.99 |
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Motley Crystal Quartz Faceted Weave Flower Beads Cabochon CAB 1 PCS SN178 $2.99 |
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GOLD T FILIGREE CROSS W. PEARL, CRYSTAL & BLUE/LILAC FLOWER CAB & GOLD T. CHAIN! $9.50 |
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40.93Cts. RED CRYSTAL DRUZY AGATE GEODE OVAL CAB MATCHED PAIR GEMS GEMSHOP $14.99 |
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Garnet crystals red facet/cab mine rough 1/4 pound $9.99 |
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44.60CT. BLUE CRYSTAL DRUZY AGATE GEODE MATCHED PAIR CUSHION CAB GEMSHOP $14.99 |
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0.91 ct. Blazing! Oval Cab Sheen Green Crystal Unheated Opal $0.99 |
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White Crystal Quartz Faceted Weave Flower Beads Cabochon CAB 1 PCS SN183 $2.99 |
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Opal crystal facet/cab mine rough Welo Ethiopia 1 pound lots $349.99 |
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1 SWAROVSKI ART 8115 CAB 20MM PENDENT $6.95 |
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g46983 37x27x6 Crystal Agate Oval CAB Cabochon $2.99 |
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#1122 Swarovski Crystal 16mm Round Stone CAB-4pcs $6.99 |
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6pcs Preciosa Czech Caribbean Sea Opal Blue 18×13 Oval Cabs SPLENDID SEAFOAM !!! $11.05 |
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12pcs Preciosa Czech Caribbean Sea Opal Blue 14×10 Oval Cabs SPLENDID SEAFOAM !! $9.99 |
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Rare Victorian Motif – Czech Preciosa Iridescent Cabs – 8pc 13x18mm – ORIG WRAPS $9.99 |
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Pietersite Cabochon,Chatoyant,Petersite,Crystal CAB,Gem $59.99 |
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24.52CT. MATCHED PAIR GREEN CRYSTAL DRUZY GEODE CUSHION CAB AFRICA GEMSHOP $9.99 |
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MUSEUM! 54.65Cts. RAREST BLUE CRYSTAL DRUZY/DRUSY GEODE OCTAGON CAB TOP GEMSTONE $13.00 |
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– DINOSAUR DUNG –2 lbs,Rare,Agate,Crystal,Sphere,Jasper, Rock,Rough,Cabs $5.99 |
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OPAL 1.51CTS 100% Natural Oval Cab Rainbow Crystal Gemstone 9.90mm Sudan Luxury! $2.99 |
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MUSEUM! 52.05Cts. PINK RAREST CRYSTAL DRUZY/DRUSY GEODE HEART SHAPE CAB GEMSTONE $0.99 |
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GOLD TONE FILIGREE CROSS W. PEARL, CRYSTAL & WHITE FLOWER CAB & GOLD T. CHAIN! $9.50 |
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Q59596 40x30x9 Crystal Agate Oval CAB Cabochon $2.99 |
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Fashion Crystal Quartz Faceted Weave Flower Beads Cabochon CAB 1 PCS SN182 $2.99 |
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Pietersite Cabochon,Chatoyant,Crystal CAB,Gem #0276 $9.99 |
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AGATE THUNDEREGG POLISHED SLAB WITH QUARTZ CRYSTAL COASTER LAPIDARY CAB ROUGH $14.00 |
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Q59586 30x22x7 Crystal Agate Oval CAB Cabochon $2.99 |
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1.0″ Chatoyant SUPERB LABRADORITE Crystal Cab Gem $9.99 |
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Black Crystal Quartz Faceted Weave Flower Beads Cabochon CAB 1 PCS SN179 $2.99 |
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Natural pietersite 5 rings crystal CAB, chatoyant 1267 $9.99 |
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Natural Crystal Titanium Druzy Cabochon CAB B06656 $3.99 |
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20mm Malachite Beads Cabochon CAB 5pcs No Drilled C1782 $2.76 |
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Vintage Rhinestones – 8x6mm Smoke Topaz Oval Cab Flatback 36 $1.99 |
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Vintage Rhinestones – 10mm Lt Siam Ruby Dome CAB FB 10 $1.99 |
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Natural Agate Quartz Geode Crystal CAB Gem $9.99 |
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Chatoyant Cabochon Brown Gold Bronzite Crystal CAB Gem $9.99 |
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OBSIDIAN ROUGH,LAPIDARY GEMSTONE,CRYSTAL BLADE CAB SLAB WRAP CARVE GEM THERAPY $6.71 |
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A0067442 Charming crystal onyx agate round CAB Cabochon $1.75 |
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1.75″ Jewelry NATURAL Phantom QUARTZ Crystal CAB Gem $9.99 |
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Jewelry RUBY Rutilated Quartz Crystal CAB Gem $15.99 |
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Gorgeous Purple Sugilite Crystal CAB Gem Freeform 4.2oz $79.99 |
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” CC ” FX PEARL CAB & CLEAR CRYSTAL POST EARRINGS: LOVELY! + FREE CC BOOKMARK! $15.95 |
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Q56744 30x22x7 Crystal Agate Oval CAB Cabochon $2.99 |
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26.28CT. GREEN CRYSTAL DRUZY AGATE GEODE MATCHED PAIR OVAL CAB GEMSHOP $9.99 |
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2.6×2.3″BLUE Agate geode slab QUARTZ CRYSTAL stone rock thin slice polished cabs $3.99 |
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3.6″x1.4″ PURPLE Agate geode slab QUARTZ CRYSTAL stone rock slice polished cabs $4.25 |
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3.9″x2″ BLUE Agate geode slab QUARTZ CRYSTAL stone rock thin slice polished cabs $4.99 |
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Pietersite Cabochon,Chatoyant,Petersite,Crystal CAB,Gem $79.99 |
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3.3″x3″ BLUE Agate geode slab QUARTZ CRYSTAL stone rock thin slice polished cabs $6.50 |
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4.2″x2.5″ GREEN/TEAL Agate geode slab QUARTZ CRYSTAL stone rock thin slice cabs $6.99 |
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4.2×2.5″BLUE Agate geode slab QUARTZ CRYSTAL stone rock thin slice polished cabs $6.99 |
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Ford F150,F250 LD 1997-2003 Cab Roof Lights Crystal CLR $44.05 |
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1.49 ct. Elegant! Oval Cab 2 Pcs. Fancy Colour IF Opal Crystal $2.25 |
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Q53917 40x30x8 Crystal Agate Oval CAB Cabochon $2.99 |
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1.30 ct. Intense! Pear Cab Sheen Party Crystal IF Opal Africa $10.00 |
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Q54709 20x15x6 Crystal Agate Oval CAB Cabochon $2.99 |
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Dodge Ram PU 1994-1998 Cab Roof Lights, LED Crystal Clear Chrome Base(5ps) $123.56 |
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Ford F150 / F250 LD 1997-2003 Cab Roof Lights, LED Crystal Clear 5 Pc/Set $152.20 |
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GMC GMC Truck 1988-1999 Cab Roof Lights Crystal Clear HD (5ps) $44.05 |
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New 100PCS Crystal CLEAR AB Glass CRYSTAL CUBE BEADS Pink AB 6X6mm#CAB $0.99 |
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GMC Sierra 1999-2006 Cab Roof Lights, LED Crystal Clear Chrome Base(3ps) $131.70 |
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Dodge Ram PU 1999-2002 Cab Roof Lights, LED Crystal Clear Chrome Base(5ps) $124.10 |
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Natural Crystal Titanum Druzy Cabochon CAB A127037(Free Ship) $3.99 |
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Natural Crystal Titanum Druzy Cabochon CAB A127039(Free Ship) $3.99 |
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Ruby-oval-cab,8.82×7.55×4.72mm,3.15ct,RU-B22,natural crystal rough born $95.04 |
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0.45 ct. Genuine Free Form Cab Multi Colors Crystal Opal Australia $19.99 |
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1.15 ct. Iridescent Free Form Cab Multi Colors Crystal Opal Australia $1 NR! $0.99 |
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2.10 ct. Genuine Free Form Cab Multi Colors Crystal Opal Australia $9.99 |
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GOLD TONE FILIGREE CROSS W. PEARL, CRYSTAL & BLUE FLOWER CAB & GOLD T. CHAIN! $8.50 |
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Fashion Ring Over 3 inches Blue Green Lilac Cabs Crystals Stretchy Band NOC $3.50 |
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Vintage Heart Pendant Necklace – Green Glass Star Sapphire Cab [Faux] & Crystal $9.99 |
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Druzy Druse Quartz Crystal Chalcedony Agate Jasper Old Stock Lapidary Cab Rough $9.99 |
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ANGEL CAMEO HANDCRAFTED SKELETON KEY CHAIN W. CRYSTAL CAB & VIRGIN MARY MEDAL! $3.95 |
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16.55CTS. RED COLOR CRYSTAL DRUZY AGATE GEODE FANCY CAB AFRICA GEMSHOP $2.29 |
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Lot of Moonstone Crystal Gem Mineral for Cabbing Cab Cabochon $7.98 |
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MASSIVE! 58.45Cts. RAREST HOT PINK CRYSTAL DRUZY GEODE OVAL CAB AFRICAN GEMSTONE $1.36 |
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Q59553 30x20x7 Crystal Agate Oval CAB Cabochon $2.99 |
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Q59588 40x30x9 Crystal Agate Oval CAB Cabochon $3.78 |
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18.17CTS. DESIGNER PINK CRYSTAL DRUZY AGATE GEODE OVAL CAB AFRICA GEMSHOP $0.99 |
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43.60CT. STUNNING BLUE CRYSTAL DRUZY AGATE GEODE RARE CUSHION PAIR CAB GEMSHOP $14.99 |
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Petrified Wood Crystal with Desert Jasper Cab pendant $5.00 |
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Onyx Crystal Pendant with Howlite Cab (Very Nice) $5.00 |
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Piccasso Stone Crystal with Jade Cab pendant $5.00 |
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Goldstone crystal with Unakite Cab Pendant $5.00 |
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Petrified Wood Crystal with Moss Agate Cab pendant $5.00 |
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Poppy Jasper Crystal with Jade Cab Pendant $5.00 |
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Howlite Crystal with Desert Sand Jasper Cab pendant $5.00 |
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Rainbow Florite crystal with Howlite Cab Pendant $5.00 |
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Honey Lemon Agate crystal with Jade Cab Pendant $5.00 |
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12pc Vintage Glass 18×13 Hematite GUNMETAL Cameo Cabs Cabochons SHINE RARE LOOK! $9.99 |
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1.08 ct. Alluring! Oval Cab Hot Orange Sheen Fancy Crystal Opal $0.99 |
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MINT! Vintage ST JOHN leather PINK snake BELT with huge CRYSTAL CABS adjustable $130.00 |
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MINT! Vintage ST JOHN leather PALE GREEN BELT with huge CRYSTAL CABS adjustable $130.00 |
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MINT! Vintage ST JOHN leather and snake BELT with huge CRYSTAL CABS adjustable $130.00 |
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46.32CT. STUNNING PINK CRYSTAL DRUZY AGATE GEODE MATCHED PAIR OVAL CAB GEMSHOP $14.99 |
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27.80CTS. LOVELY !! PINK CRYSTAL DRUZY AGATE GEODE FANCY CAB AFRICA GEMSHOP $0.99 |
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g46986 37x27x6 Crystal Agate Oval CAB Cabochon $2.99 |
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22.50CTS. LOVELY !! CRYSTAL DRUZY AGATE GEODE FANCY CAB AFRICA GEMSHOP $0.99 |